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Breathless

I held my breath waiting for you to help me breathe
But you were absent I stayed breathless and blind
I want to save myself before I drown under your absense
The light that followed you around left me too...so I remain in the dark not knowing what light is,I let the hours and minutes without you sink in me...why is there a void;
in me...this emptiness that begs to be vacated how could I live life without breathing?
I'm afraid of closing my eyes...for fear of them being closed forever..
I realize your gone...and you've moved on...happy in your life
I'll leave and stay breathless because loving someone who does not love you  kills you in small doses..

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  • Yes indeed this is true.

    Remember, before loving someone else, you must be the breath in your lungs. I'm not suggesting that you don't know this, just pointing it out.
    Oh yeah by the way, it's good to me because it came from the heart and of this I can tell.
  • dogpooper
    August 22

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    This is an exceptionally good poem.I feel remorse when I remember woman that my disappearance effected this way.