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Loving you

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Delicious imaginations of sensual delights
Looking into to the depths of your eyes
Sexual temptations set this body afire

With one finger tracing down your spine
Following the line with warm breathe
Hands up and down your back one move

Fingers to soft inner thighs trailing kisses
Bodies pressed into a very close embrace
Kissing the nape of your neck lingering lips

Anticipation of erotic sensual sensations
Thoughts of your warm hands, caresses
Stroking, teasing, overcome with desire

Eager for your lush lips upon mine
Passions raging my body afire
Penetration the culmination of our desire

Our bodies move in swift deep rhyme
I can not help telling you how fine,
Your breasts are as I whisper our love

Watching as you slide down on desire
Looking deep into your eyes
Telling how you thrill me in pleasure


Pounding heart beats as we reach rapture
Moaning trembling with hot release
Love fulfilled as we melt into bliss

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  • Blissfullhatred silver member
    August 22, 2008

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    This is very good. I definatly can see me and him doing this now that i am offically engaged.
    Good luck
    ♥ Billys Baby


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    August 22, 2008

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    Such Passion...

    This is so sensual and yet so very lovely...soft words that create tender emotions and deep desire. Beautifully erotic with such class and wonder. Best of luck in the contest!

    Love~
    ~Azlyn~