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Encroaching Daybreak

Hunting in the verdant wood
I pray you spare more time.

Stomach howls as I lurk
between trees;
ensconced by coal-black cloud.

Until sweet naivety stumbles forwards,
please keep hiding.

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Pic prompt: http://closer-to-heaven.deviantart.com/art/New-Dawn-84692027
Word prompt: dawn

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  • fortyninereasons gold member
    August 27, 2008
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    Thank you for your entry into my contest. I enjoyed reading your words.
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