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You thought what?

Shackled to a cross now thinking he owns my soul
satan begins to play his "Lil game" of full control
In a graveyard of the mind, he torments me still
as I stand bound to this Angel against my free will
Thoughts start to alter ego... eyes become red
no longer any pressure from these horns at my head
But that just seems to easy for his shallow reign
he prefers distort and disfigurement among all the pain
This game is about to take a twist, little does he know
I am ~THE ANGEL OF DEATH and it's time to show!

 

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  • poetryality silver member
    September 20, 2008

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    Very clever and indeed a dark one for you dear friend. Just kick old satan to the curb, he has no place in your world. The best to you always!


    Much Love ♥

    Renee


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    Thank you so much for your entry. Judging will take place shortly. Best wishes in the contest.

    Passionspromise


  • Shakes-spear
    August 25, 2008

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    Very dark

    I read thing in this that make me sad. This is very dark for you, but I like it. It's been a while bro., but I think of you often, Shaker


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    August 24, 2008

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    to both the poem and the pic all i can say is amazing, it has been sometimes i think but keep ti flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Jalalbad gold member
    August 23, 2008
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    Then sting satan to death with the sting of death and please be quick about it. Cute poem


  • ebaby
    August 22, 2008

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    Hi Gets, long time no see...... I really was going with the flo of this poem and the darkenss took over, the last line threw me as its about time to show??? mm interesting....


  • Pianokidd
    August 22, 2008
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    I like this. Very Good Applauds

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