My child,
the day you were born
is the moment my life began?
A contest entry
- 13 Words Only for this Picture IV by Manda Kathryn.
700 points, ended August 22, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short Poems' Wanted!! by SignifyingNothing.
450 points, ended October 19, 2008, 123 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I want readers to give me honest feedback and any suggestions you may have.
Comments
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Aw, this was sweet. Such a nice little poem. I don't have kids myself, but this echoes the way I think many of my friends felt when they held their babies for the first time.
Nice poem. Congratulations on the trophy and thanks for entering. -
Oh so beautiful and heart felt. Such power in so few words. Great job! Blessings, Patty
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Beautiful, how I wish every Mother on earth felt this
♥
Thank You & Best of Luck!
Stay safe
~Manda
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That's very nicely said. Good luck in the contest and happy trais.
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