I wrote I love you on the beach.
The rising tide is coming for its reach.
The heart I scribed was meant for you.
When washed away does not mean my love is gone for you.
Because if you would like, I would put that heart with your
name on me with a tattoo.
That would stay on forever.
No riptide could never take your man of pleasure.
My heart is yours internally, externally,
forever to be my bride to groom..
Author notes
I read the rules... and I wanted to say thank you for such a great poem... you inspired me to help... thanks again.... Your friend in Poetry... JackReed3
A contest entry
- Pic Prompt Yay!! COME SEE!!! by BeautifullyBroken42.
450 points, ended September 8, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Excellent
Hi Jack, me again. This is a beautiful one, the only thing I would change is add one word after exterioraly, I would put eternaly. But if you add it, check the spelling, I could be wrong.
Catie
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Wow. This is an enchanting and beautiful poem. This flowed so well and gave me wonderful images. Amazing write! Good luck in the contest.
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