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Abstract

on Bourbon Street beyond secrets dark
time stands still without a thought

scrambled pieces of sunset lies
as stories fall upon skin deaf ears

in Clover Grill weak coffee burns
against the thoughts of better days

with magical dragons against beaded breasts
life goes on in drab abstract





Author notes

inspired by picture posted by Artis..New Orleans, so many stories, so many simplicities, blanketed with immesurable grief
Freda Mooney

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  • artis
    September 4, 2008
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    Like the dregs found in the bottom of a coffee stained cup

    one can read the emptiness that is found so much in lifes long and bitter drink. Ten trillion windows that hold glimpses into others lives, never quite revealing the darker side just beyond the glow of the glass viewport...great write~~~Thank you for your entry. ~~~Artis


  • onlyifucare
    September 2, 2008
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    wow. this is very good. it shows how empty life can be. very good


  • toomysterious
    August 22, 2008
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    This paints a bleak and lonely picture.