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my dreams, they take me[[to you]]

To me, a dreamless sleep
only leaves my wishes on hold
                        [til morning]
... and then my thoughts explode
                        one million shimmering, sparkling beauties
                                                invade my head like the roman army,
                                                                    overtaking my every function
... before I even open my eyes.

When I dream of you it's beautiful.
It's you.
and me.
and nothing but.
[not even so much as a stitch of clothing]
There, my every erotic fantasy
is satisfied by only you:
their discoverer.
their deliverer.
their delight.
[their guiltless pleasure]


[[my guiltless pleasure]]

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  • spideracer gold member
    September 2, 2008

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    Am I missing out on something, I've never experienced anything even close in my life. If I were to write anything as beautiful as this poem, it would be made up. When you write such poems, I can tell you write from experience. I like your style and you inspire me.


  • A-Sky-Lark
    August 31, 2008

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    lol i like it..

    To me, a dreamless sleep
    only leaves my wishes on hold
    [til morning]
    ... and then my thoughts explode
    one million shimmering, sparkling beauties
    invade my head like the roman army,
    overtaking my every function
    ... before I even open my eyes.

    When I dream of you it's beautiful.
    It's you.
    and me.
    and nothing but.

    liked those lines best :]