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Secrets

the dark and I
have much in common
we have secrets
we never share
we never take or give
we know no joy
only recluse
we both have dark pasts
and most likely dark futures
and though we are alike
we are different in a single thing
I have hope
that i may
someday...
love

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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    Thank you so much for your entry. Judging will take place shortly. Best wishes in the contest.

    Passionspromise


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 27, 2008

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    Humm..it is something wonderful emotion in few simple words......I love it...well done..and thanks for entering my contest...


  • new born
    August 22, 2008

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    i thought this poem was really good.i like the ending.
    i think this poem really speaks to the loners and "losers" in life