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Sometimes I Get To Thinking

Upon the experiment
the grass is never greener
and my bite marks have faded

I need new ones
I need a new
graveyard

flesh canvas

paint me in crimson reverie

don't touch me, unless you mean to
break me- in one way or another

I want
        your body
but you taste like no.


I never take it for an answer,
but you should


take me for a ride.

               

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You heard me.

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  • Chainsaw
    December 24, 2008

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    It's been too long since I read your work.

    I especially love:

    "I need a new
    graveyard

    flesh canvas"

    Brilliant, as always.


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    November 24, 2008
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    a vampire style tale
    it sounds like, or at least reminds me of

    very well penned

  • x26ss
    September 29, 2008
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    refreshing work, really creative, and quite bold. Which impresses me the most.


  • robforte
    August 22, 2008
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    i read it again just to make sure i liked it as much as i thought i did.

    i heard you.

  • dx d by me
    August 22, 2008

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    Checked this out what half a dozen times, and always get kicked where it counts. Love the edge and the erotic stab! Geo


  • Poetic Obscenity
    August 22, 2008
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    O.O

    Dirrrrrty.
    Very dirty. So Yeah. -backs away slowly- hehe.

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