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Divestment

Aloof belief, comparison

        drawn express,

from garners,

hysterical, inclusive just

        karuna, like

my noodle other

      phenomena, quantum

rooted, second tide

understanding verible,

which x-ing yammer

         zen.

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  • luvdrkchocolate
    October 13, 2008

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    Wow. This is quite some poem that you have going on here. I read this once or twice and I thought it was really neat sounding and I was even wondering what one of the words meant because I had never heard it before. But then I saw that contest that it was in and it made a lot more sense. lol I thought you did a good job of expressing yourself.
    • haley27 gold member
      October 13, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you for commenting on my poem. ABC poems are bit change to make. I'm glad you liked. Haley27

  • Touchof1der gold member
    August 26, 2008
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    It's amazing the power and thought we can project behind 26 words. Best of luck to you in the contest. I appreciate your taking the time and making the effort to enter. I hope it proved to be an enjoyable experience and challenge for you.
    ♥ Touchof1der

  • OurGoldenYears Page gold member
    August 24, 2008
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    wow rather well written ..good luck
    • haley27 gold member
      August 24, 2008
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      thank u

      thank u for the wonderful comment given to my short poem. Haley27
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