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Angel Whispers.

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Talk in whispers
soft and low,
tell me the things
I ought to know.

Such fond rememberance
springs to mind,
those tiny gestures,
sweet as wine.

Warm waves of comfort
soothe the brow,
I sense you near me
here and now.

So not alone,
nor lonely be,
forever with the
heart of me.

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  • jjbreunig3
    October 27, 2008
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    A lovely piece...

    A lovely piece; enjoyed the softness and flow of your words; wonderfully written. --Joe


  • silverscent gold member
    August 28, 2008

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    The fluency of your words and rhyme is fantastic.

     

    When I saw the image, it sprung thoughts of darkness and Gothic angels. But the poem seems different and much lighter in subject. The rhythm and sibilance certainly pushed me into reading it like as a soothing and gentle poem.

    I don't know if it's just my own connotations causing this, but that effectively clashes the image with the poem.

    Otherwise this was a very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing.

    • cutiepie gold member
      August 28, 2008
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      Angels come in many guises...we have the images set as cast Iron in our minds eye, but it is often the "reformed" angel that can speak the truth so we can understand a little easier. Thank you for your comments, I am delighted that you enjoyed it


  • A-Cinnamon-Spider
    August 26, 2008

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    I usually don't take to this style of poetry too strongly, but there was something about this peice that really got me. I enjoyed the read very much. It was simple, yet full of love and hope.
    Great write!

  • darrylblacksr
    August 23, 2008

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    Simply lovely, it's so soothing to read and calming of one's soul. I thank you for sharing it with me and God Bless you and yours...


    • cutiepie gold member
      August 23, 2008
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      Thank you Darryl.Delighted that you enjoyed it


  • Angelflower
    August 22, 2008

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    This was really lovely!!! I enjoyed the flow and rhyme which was really suitable.. You did such a wonderful job!!! Bravo!! thank you very much for sharing!!


    Angel


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    August 22, 2008

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    i loved this cutie pie so much you always have a unique personal style about your writings i enjoyed this

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