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delicate touch










Elle n’a pas peur.
she has stolen red
twisted it until it
formed faces
that were rain washed

crowded,

re-sealed
she leaves the house
in her torn red coat
the key cold between her tits.

She has advised a modern poet
of her arrival,
mentions that she may buy a hat
to be becoming.

her smile will not open to crack red lips
though she believes he understand keys
she will not open into colors
just to be brave.

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  • Grunts Girl gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    well i am stooopid to the first line
    but the rest of it...
    nothing like not wanting to wreck your hot awsome red lipstick...


  • Cannonsfire gold member
    August 22, 2008

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    Well it was soft until I got to 'tits' lol then I do believe it got more real lol..are hats that becoming?? I think they just hide the eyes so we can peek and not get caught That's what women do you know, we don't drop our eyes to be demure only for effect