Maybe its not betrayal
Maybe its not a knife in my back
Maybe im taking it too hard
But maybe, you forgot a little word called tact
Maybe it was meant to happen
Maybe it was meant to be
Doesn't mean he'll ever
Love you more than me
Best friends, well
It doesn't mean a thing
You know exactly where I stand
And why were hanging on a string
Sometimes these things just happen
Maybe, you just can't help how you feel
But maybe, this was just a bad idea
Maybe, you forgot my tasteless appeal
I guess I never really mattered
Well I hope you won't miss me
No I cant forgive and I wont forget
Who you turned out to be
A contest entry
- Your Wish Is My Command (LOL) by fairytalelovestory.
350 points, ended September 15, 2008, 18 entries
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betrayal
it happens so often. I was told once that if in your life you can count the real friends on one hand that you are lucky. Seems that when the going gets tough, the "friends" you think you have, get going for themselves. I wish I had the words to make the pain go away, but I do not. I will never lie to you and that is the truth. Let the chips fall where they will, but when he hurts her....she may be able to understand your pain. Good luck...I love ya, The Shaker
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thanks dad, i love you too x
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oh gosh.
I've been in the exact same situation.
I loved this poem.
You described it so good x.O
well done -
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thanks so much
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hmm...sounds like someone went through a little bit of a cat fight
...you described the feeling of this very well...when best friends change these are the exact feeling...very well written...great write
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haha....cat fight. wow. that doesnt half describe it
thanks
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Hi, my daughter... Lots of sadness in this nicely written poem. I hate to see you hurt, but friends never define you. Anyone who is close to you is lucky to have you!
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Thanks mom
But maybe theyre not that lucky. I always seem to get in fights with people
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wow very nicely penned good luck
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cheers
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well penned....u have written a piece which is common to all .....me at times too .....great work...your emotions are well displayed here ....i feel sorry for you if it really happened to you ....but a great write mus say !!!
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thank you my love <3
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this is exactly how i feel sometimes. Great work
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Thank youse <3
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I'm guessing this has something to do with your best friend hooking up with the person you like. God this is such a movie / cliche thing. Your poem totally hits the nail on the head. What does a best friend mean? It means that you pour your heart out to some person who has the same interests as you, so they can, when they feel like it, use all of that information to slowly break you down. Well, congratulations on fitting all of this into a compact little poem with great flow and meter. It was a great read, and pretty much sums up how i feel about my bestie sometimes.
Well done,
Chin up,
Swim.x
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Hah
I kinda half wish it was the guy I liked..it would be easier to forgive her then.
Its my worst enemy. The person who caused hell in my life. I guess its like when they promise they'll be there for you through hell. and then do shite like this
well.
thanks for the comment though, and all the support, i really appreciate it
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