Waiting for you...
I've drank so much coffee
That I'm jittery with suspense
Wondering...
Are you coming?
I need you warm embraces
And soft kisses... to ignite my passions
Of sharing my hidden treasures.
Please come soon.
For my heart is broken without you.
dragonheart1
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JinSays.
500 points, ended August 23, 2008, 12 entries
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I have to say that this was wonderfully written! I am really surprised. You took me to a place I know oh so well. We all have been there, haven't we? Excellent take on the prompt. In Love & Light... Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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I love this write, and was hoping to find something on the other end of that link you posted....denada...alas, I shall remain here awondering...
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Beautiful heartfelt write, and I agree with Jackie, I've been there too...
Fantastic job with the prompt, if you get that link working and you want me to see what's there, (hinthint), then git on it..
alright?
Jin
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What link are you talking about on your comment for my poem,
Waiting for? I'm in the dark....
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Aww.. yep, I know that feeling. Lonely and passionate!!
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I need you warm embraces And soft kisses... to ignite my passions Of sharing my hidden treasures.a beautiful take on the promt good luck in the contest
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Know that is summing it up.
Love what you drew from the picture.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Blessings.
Frozentearz
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