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one star hotel (senryu)








one star hotel
a luminous crucifix
keeps me awake






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  • yukitosumi
    August 23, 2008

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    Oh I like this senryu a great deal. You did a wonderful job of capturing a single moment. A wonderful setting and final line. Well done.
    Best,
    El