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the world

the world is dark and painful
when you look out all you see is suffering
the world is slowly becoming a mess
when i read the paper i only read tragedy
we are the ones who can stop this
we are the people who will make a difference
look inside your heart and tell some one you care



scene!!!!!

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  • speechless
    August 27, 2008
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    lol u have to be scene to know


  • XxdeathwishxX
    August 27, 2008
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    ?????????????? i sont get the scene bit at the bottom but a very strong minded poem gd job