The weight of weary days pushes you into sleep
Burdens of life crease your dreaming face
The river of your dreaming shifts restless
But gentle steps start to ripple across the surface
The water becomes calm and still
And the angel of the night comes into being
A goddess of elegance beyond your dreams
Unearthly beauty beyond conscious seeing
Her body radiates with lunar power
And she cradles you in her soft caress
A warm and quickening touch
That renders you so powerless
You lay there trapped between her thighs
Transfixed by eyes that gleam so rare
Your eyes snap wide open and yet
Her phenomenal figure is still there
Her crimson kiss sinks into your neck
And she decants you as she feeds
From now on you’re her thrall
And it’s her you live to please
Author notes
3 guesses as to who this one's inspired by lmao. Or perhaps i just want an excuse to write about sex and vampyrism hehe.
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very well written , very good
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My poet
What a wonderful write. Such words of beauty for a young and talented poet. I do love that fact that this piece was in such good taste.
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Thank you greatly for your comments.
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A ver intriguing write. sensual and dark at onces.. D/s sounding actually there in the ending. SOmething that I truly enjoyed reading.. wonderful.
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Thank you very much, i appreciate it.
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Quite Impressive
I rarily read such poetry as the one you have posted her ebut I cna say without a doubt in my mind you did quite a wonderful job with this write. I really love how you use vamperism and eroticism and mix em beautifully in this write of yours. I find it quite amazing how depe this poem got and how easily I could visualize all of this taking place. any ways nice work and keep it up
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"Burdens of life crease you dreaming face"
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This sounds like D/s in a way.
Frustrated much? 
A very nicely written poem though, my dear. It flows very well.
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No idea what D/S is supposed to be lmao but thanks
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Pffffft. Dom/sub.
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Ah yes well that was what i was aiming for in an obscure way.
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