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Marionette

She plucks a flower. Stargazing,
she leaves untouched both Daisy, and Violet.
Her youthful sashay has become rusty.
Moving from place to place now
a bone dance of necessity, rather than
a chance to move to life's jazz,
that humble tune played note by note.
Ominous, on a xylophone made of granite. 
Her heart once brazen and bold,
is just a pebble smooth burgundy window,
revealing the imminent and intimate.
Her grace-full hands, never still,
shaking, but willing to give autographs.
Able to wave hello and goodbye simultaneously,
as she flashes her Braggadocio smile.

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  • Tamera
    September 4, 2008
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    Thank you for a challenging and interesting contest. I enjoyed it. I am honored by receiving gold. Congratulations to the other winners!

  • Judith Chandler
    August 22, 2008
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    I really enjoyed this. I wasn't expecting to get any submissions in this contest that deal with life and all that.

    Her youthful sashay has become rusty.
    Moving from place to place now
    a bone dance of necessity.

    Impressive lines that touched me.

    Thank you for your submission.