clouds get in the way sometimes
they are so beautiful
but there is blue that is unkind
I feel so cold in winter
when
the cirrocumulous
exhales the sun
I wish that I was warm
forever
maybe this whole
heaven and hell shit
ain't all that bad
I do love a good fire
Please tell me what you think
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The sarcasm, the wit. Oh how you continually speak so much in so few words. Right on, write on!
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wow...that made me smile like a big dork.lol once again and no surprise- my skull has exploded..there's brains all over in the sector behind me...i don't even know what to say. this goes into my favorites rolodex...at the risk of sounding cliche---i'm amazed by you......always
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The word 'shit' is fantastic. I love it & the way you used it.
Also...2 titles.
Interchangeable is always cool & I like the juxtaposition.
"clouds get in the way sometimes"
I like this. It's so abstract.
"but there is blue that is unkind"
Again, abstract metaphor. But understandable, yeah
'cirrocumulous'
What the shit does this mean? LoL sounds like it's related to cirrus clouds???
"I do love a good fire" could be translated in many ways.
Jessica
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a cirriform cloud of a class characterized by thin, white patches, each of which is composed of very small granules or ripples: of high altitude, ab. 20,000–40,000 ft. (6000–12,000 m).
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Damn, you're a nerd. Shit is fascinating.
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thank you
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You've got a point here... I do love a good fire too, but I have to agree with Chez - there are other ways - or so they say, lol.
~ Nicolette
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lol There are other ways to keep warm you know
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