Among the haloed few
rain falls upon the meadow
the rhythm of their
voices raise and fall,
hands caress
the beating heart
of love's Golden kiss
left upon our lips..
Author notes
15 poets
30 words (exactly)
24 hours
Prompt ~ Dawn
A contest entry
- Quickie...................... 15/30/24 Word Prompt PIF by fortyninereasons.
875 points, ended August 27, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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May I suggest changing 'raise' to rise. Anyway, I enjoyed reading this. Good Luck.
Juls
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very nice..
You are so good! lots of luck in the contest my friend!
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Awww this is so soft and gentle just like it's writer
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aww thank you very much Sis!
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