Born from the ashes of a pitiful world
An Angel stretches wings, of a white bird
cringing deep from the wounds he'd immediately see
He'd hide himself in Me...
Now the bell tolls, that it's time to come out
An angel shrivels fearfully, and full of doubt
And hiding his face fully in a mask to see
This angel would become as Me
Fearing through my eyes, and gripping my heart
Not wishing to yet tread, not wishing to yet start
He'd spread his grip and then he'd see
The race that spawned dear Me
Tactfully and tactically he'd reach his fist
Prying away at walls to see what he had missed
So many minds, hearts tainted and torn
The Angel for the first time felt scorn
But just as he peered through with his own eyes
Others gazed him back, and plotted his demise
The demons and the mind weavers tore him apart
They tortured that poor Angel's heart
But now he can't blame, the Angel that he be
It'll take more than that to set his wills free
But the world's taint, indeed found he
And tore from him his glee
Now the Angel beckons, and seeks his love
Now the Angel lives, and shows them of
The many sins that cross, and the virtues to pass
His heart was free at last
Though the Angel knew, that he'd changed from birth
He knew another life was on the way to this earth
Perhaps, again, he'd have his chance to see
Divine.. Purity...
Author notes
A new piece, written, when fears and inhibitions took...
Comments
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Nice flow!!
i like it alot.
your words blind me (i mean that in a good way)
i love it great job bane^^mew
~Moonchild~ -
That was very well done Bane I really liked it had a good flow to it and the rhyme was absolutely wonderful it pulled it to gether quite well. Thank you for sharing this.
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the story and flow was great
rhyme nicely done
Poor Angel that is lost
can find happiness at what cost
for with love one must care
or seek more than ones share
Sitting back and looking in
with a demonic like grin
Sits a dragonkin
one name of Riftkin
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wow.
Just..amazing, m'dear..
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