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Just a Little Something

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s are cute, s are strange and me, I'm

So, what makes you , or ?

Author notes

Hope this was what you wanted.... anyways, I tried

Also, to those who are completely lost.... I know it doesn't make any sense but, it's what I could come up with for the contest it was intended for.

A contest entry

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Comments

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    August 25, 2008

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    I think that it isa cute and you did a great job with it goodluck in the contest best wishes and much love always


  • Riftkin gold member
    August 22, 2008

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    This is just great and I love it
    nicely done dear poet.

    Riftkin


  • echo-ink
    August 22, 2008

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    hehehe, this was great, yessa!

    Ahh, roses make me happy and feel loved
    Cows are cute, pigs are strange and me, I'm cool
    So, what makes you happy, sad or mad?

    I could understand everything you said in your story, this is exactly what I wanted. BRAVO!!!

    Great job. have three bunnies for perfection.