Words flower
Sweet petal like
Spread fragrance
With touch of her shadow
Tender beyond smooth
Transform fallow in me
Most fertile to instant sprout
Filling sweet nectar
Feelings follow crevices
Gently as raindrops
She has touch of earth
Patience and compassion
Is she image?
Moving thoughts effortless
Stationed beyond realm of dreams
While I open my eyes,
I find her,
only When eyelids shut
As pupil in wink
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Pretty Picture Prompt # 16 by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended August 24, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I agree with Lady Dementia this has beautiful gentle imagery.. a dream of her...
Excellent take!
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This has beautiful gentle imagery to it. Wonderfully penned, thanks for entering and good luck
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This has many soft images, but I am troubled by words missing from normal syntax. This could be my hangup. Good luck!
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thank you!
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