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Mardi Gras: The Morning After

                         

 

Sitting in the Clover Grill on Bourbon Street, waiting for a taxi in this grand, giant city,

I shared my sausage, egg, and grits with the lap of my jeans while watching the world

go by, as I savored the experience of one last cup of strong, chicory flavored coffee.

 

Mark Twain said "New Orleans is an old world city famous for its cuisine and Market Street

chicory" - it's true. Aside from an ambulance racing by with screaming sirens, this morning

was very quiet, as a street sweeper began to clean the debris of the wild party celebration:

 

Plastic cups, bar straws, empty cigarette packages, broken strings of multicolored beads

and fake gemstones, a tarnished toy voodoo doll, beer cans, crumpled potato chip bags,

and torn flyers announcing the newest gay club in the infamous French Quarter district.

 

Somewhere, a homeless trumpet wailed as the dirty sidewalk bore witness to the sins

of its carnival revelers the week before, including striking resemblances to vomit and blood, reminders of the drama played out by the colorful, feathered masks of the crowd.

 

Now, everyone was either sleeping, or floating in the river as they washed out to sea.

My cab never arrived, but the rain did. An old, mangy dog ran down the street with a

broken chain dragging behind its legs, and I knew it was time to find my way home.

 

                                      

 

 

Author notes

My personal experience of the Crescent City, the home of Mardi Gras, jazz, and chicory coffee -
except for the Clover Grill on Bourbon Street, which is the contest image, courtesy of Artis. The Mardi Gras flag is in the public domain, provided by Wikipedia.

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  • artis
    September 4, 2008
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    Exccellent portrait of the big easy, exposing all of its hard angles as well, I have walked these streets in awe, astounded by the beauty and the sordid mixed together in a miasma of fragile existence. Thanks for your entry.~~Artis


    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      September 4, 2008
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      Thank you for the HM!!!

      And congratulations to all the winners!!! This was a fun contest, thanks for hosting!!! Peace, Cyn


  • moluv10
    August 22, 2008

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    Wonderful story! i felt like i was there with you. Love the imagery in this great write. Good luck in the contest.

    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      August 22, 2008
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      Thank you for the compliment...

      Glad you like the poem, and thanks again!!! Peace, Cyn


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    August 22, 2008
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    Excellent imagery within this piece--
    Well done & Best of Luck in the contest!


  • arafura gold member
    August 22, 2008

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    I love this snapshot in words, of New Orleans. You bring the city to life in your reader's mind. Wonderful description and imagery.

  • Bad Bill
    August 22, 2008

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    This is excellent writing--gritty and realistic, with a great eye for detail. Very well done.

    Bill


  • JinSays gold member
    August 22, 2008

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    First the Crescent City is my favorite city on Earth. Second, who let Artis loose with a camera? Im kidding Artis...kidding!
    Third, what happened to the dog?
    LOL. You don't have to answer, I can't already tell
    Great penning here, loves to you friend,
    jin


    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      August 22, 2008
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      Thank you!!!

      I left off the parts from the night beofre, you know, when the people in the crowd bare all, in order to receive a string of the infamous plastic beads?!!? And the feathered masks, which usually bore a resemblance to some animal. Of course, why not? And the dog? Oh, that was just a hooker from the night before. LOL

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