Awake young rosebud
awake
let this dew on my tounge
water
the petals of your
desire
Awake young rosebud
the dream has just
begun.
A contest entry
- Sensual Delights (ADULTS ONLY) by Dusty Rose.
950 points, ended September 3, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I like this write, short but sweet and gets your emotion across in just a few words and is truly sensual.
Best wishes to you. -
Real nice- always better understated. And thanks for your service- Dad was a captain in the Army, though I never served.
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Very nicely done.
Subtle and beautiful.
A wonderful "awakening"
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Beauty
A very sweet, well formed poem.
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Tremulous
...the flush and blush of roses and dreams
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Karen
Thanks. Hope you ae doing good.
Joe
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thud....
now how sensual is this????
soft sweet short...perfect.
Love, Lane
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Lane
Thank you for your kind words. It's not one of your
" burn the page off the computer screen" type poem, but Ithink it's good.
Joe
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Good work Joe!
Good job on this one Joe! I liked the visual description in this. You are awesome!!! THANKS!!
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Pat
Thanks my friend. I appreciate it.
Joe
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Very Nice. Short and very sweet.
let this dew on my tongue
water
the petals of your
desire
Very nice indeed..
Thank you so much for entering.
Dusty
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Dusty
Thanks for reading. Glad to enter your contest.
Joe
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