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tangible perfection

The fading sunlight danced within his golden eyes,
As he smiled into another dangerously intoxicating kiss.
If perfection were something tangible,
If would live within the lines of his face.

Such hazardously expectations he has,
But I revel in his protective charm.
Because his existence is my sustenance.
Without those eyes, my world would cease.

My skies are bleak and starless,
Without his smile to inspire such shine.
The only rainbows that would ever dazzle me,
Lie within his perfect porcelain skin.

As twilight might signal the end of this day,
Eternity is a lot longer.
With his hand in mine,
I'd give him the entire world.

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Username: corrupt angel
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Used this particular quote for inspiration from Twilight: "So your ready for this to be the end? For this to be the twilight of your life, though your life has barely started. You're ready to give up everything." Edward

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  • albinoblacksheep720
    December 5, 2008
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    What can I say....

    I'm in love with your poems! Great, awesome ob. Good luck.


  • Zane Rose
    August 22, 2008

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    i love it. I love twilight. so this is very kool for me. very good write. i can see it perfectly.
    thank you and good luck.
    ~Allie~