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Truest

a moment in time
wished to be frozen

forever still
in warm embrace

arms length but far
held in blissful peace

hearts in synchronization
beating against each other

each kiss a message
of comfort and love

loss of breath
with each memory





truest

Author notes

Sometimes...you realise just how TRUE and REAL your friendship with someone can be...or love...or both...and yesterday me and her saw it first hand for the first time in a long time...

Yes we had to resist a lot of things...but it's always gonna be that way...but what we don't resist...makes us stronger...we didn't wanna leave each other's arms.

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  • Beauty Of Silence
    August 22, 2008

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    AHHH!!! i love this poem! it was short simple and written so beautifully.. love the words you've sued here! keep penning!

  • limechic
    August 22, 2008

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    aww this is beautiful....i really like it. you painted a picture that is actually very comforting. i can tell it's personal ...your emotions are obvious in it

    great job!!


  • LoveSpell-PurpleRose silver member
    August 22, 2008

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    Wonderfully Weitten My Friend !

    You have expressed your self in this poem extreemly well. I really enjoyed reading this poem of yours. Each kiss a message, of comfort and of love. Great write and word's.Brenda Gae