a youthful man plays jazz on a rusty xylophone
moving ominously through luminous violet pebbles
i comfortably pick tough rooted daisies
through his window i humbly give the man a note and an apple
Author notes
i dont think the title counts, there are 17 in the poem, i hope its ok i added a few suffexes.
A contest entry
- Word Bank for Your Enjoyment by Judith Chandler.
600 points, ended September 4, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Suffixes and extra word bank selections are okay. There is a typo - "tought" - and I will give you a chance to fix it.
Thank you for your submission.
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