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2:13 in the morning

it fuckin happened
he woke up the monster
it screamed
it roared
it played it's music
frightening everyone
shivers
chills
down the bones
thru the marrow
thump
thump
thump
thump
evil power rolling thru the walls
tempting and addictive
cursed
and loved

it fuckin scared the shit out of him
voices at the door
thru the speakers
artificial air making it's way
thru artificial lungs

the monster was awake
and he nor anyone
could stop it

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  • Abby Eyeball
    August 22, 2008

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    Different

    something along a completely different line of thoughts i've come across your way. sounds as if you've had encounters with the 3rd kind of dimension....

    -Abbs


    • belac
      August 29, 2008
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      interesting.. the night was intense when this was written