im as free as a bird in the sky as the monkey in the tree
im free to do what i please and to even take you with me
freedom is a word that we throw around freely
but with all this intervention are we free realy
free to say what we want unless it offends
when your judged by the color of thepeople you befriend
free from the government that controls our lives
and when we defy them we we are slain with death as our prize
so as i die with my last breath
ill scream "GIVE ME LIBERTY OR GIVE ME DEATH!!!!!!"
A contest entry
- the good ..the bad..and the ugly.... by redhanded.
800 points, ended August 22, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Niice man
the flow is really natural, and I can imagine RATM singin this. lol
good luck
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like this..
I really like this piece...the flow is great and I love how the end line just sums everything up...thankyou very much for entering and best of luck to you in the future and with your writing...
andi
(redhanded)
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