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Clouds

I love to look up in the sky
to see what I might see

a bunny, dog or giant boat

don't you see the clouds
love to play games too

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A contest entry

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  • jazzcat gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    For a "quickie" this is really good. You are succinct and artful in your approach. I love the last line, it made me think and smile all at once.


  • etoile
    August 22, 2008

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    this is cute, but i was expecting something with more imagery and emotions
    however this is really true and your take on the prompt was well done.

    thanks for entering and goodluck


  • Arizona Sunset
    August 21, 2008

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    so true, I love the sky and the clouds too, always fun for me to look at.. best to you in the contest ~Trisha~