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Change???

Is it possible that she'll change
Shes so different at times
It all seems so strange
So hard to tell sometimes

I dont know to believe her
She's not been the best
And my childhood is like a blur
But maybe she's giving it a rest

She was also wonderful at times
Never knew which way it was gonna go
Hopeing for a better outcome
This is what it's shown

I love her with all my heart
There's nothing i wouldnt do
To have a brand new start
But she'd have to change too

I think she's getting better
Only one way to tell
Maybe write a letter
But never to dwell

Author notes

ummm idk this is about my relationship with my mum

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    September 4, 2008
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    Excellent flow and rhyme in this heartfelt poem. Well done!


  • sunflowers21573
    August 22, 2008
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    This is awesome. I like how you were brutally honest.