Imaginings do flutter by
On wings of wee ones and fairyfly
My feet so careful not to mar
The dwellings where the fairies are.
On tippy tip toes I quietly creep
So as not to disturb the fairy's sleep
Their delicate form is a sight to see
Under shady limbs of the old Oak tree.
Their playfulness so free and wild
Like imaginings of an innocent child
I come here in truth only to see
If my fairy friends will play with me.
Or gently light upon my finger
And like me long enough to linger
And chat awhile on fairy things
Of joyous flights and fairy rings.
How does this poem make you feel? What was your general impression?
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I like the sketches of the subject which has been crafted so beautifully as well.....well done..and thanks for sharing it...
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Nice write. Love the imagery, and felt that the poem got stronger and stronger each stanza.
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This is really sweet and again the imagery is exceptionally evocative. I love the way your work flows so smoothly, it's mellow and musical in its composition. I'm not really a fan of rhyme but this works very well, none of it sounds strained or artificial. Well done. Thanks as ever for sharing.
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You do specialize in this theme of fairies...Such lovely rhyme, rhythm and flow to these verses...You are gifted in poems for children and about children...Go with your gift,dear one!
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Thank you so much!
This poem made me glad within my heart! It is one of my favorites! I actually wrote it for my mother and me since we are both fairy freaks!
As always, your comments always touch me and fan the fire within to continue! Thanks for the encouragement!XXOO
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how i wish to be a fairy sometimes grandmother it would be so much fun
<3 chicken pie
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Very delightful and nostalgic! It was easy to read....NO, it was splendid to read. Magical and sweet, yet not juvenile. Great job!
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Very prettyy.
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