She runs across the field
ready to take her stance into battle.
This is her time
Her first chance to shine.
They all begin to laugh,
realizing how small this little creature is.
The bushy brown cream tip tall,
in comparison,is bigger than the rest of her furry body.
Her little beaded black eyes
and furrow eyebrows
are disgusted by her rivals lack of respect.
She snarls, and then flinches her floppy ears
They have no idea what they are dealing with, she smirks
she kicks the dirt and kisses the sky
and is ready for a duel.
Tackle, tail whip, and body slam
she shifts right through the bites and growls.
This poor pocket monster did not know what was coming to him.
Like always she always seems to surprise you.
Author notes
I choose Eevee, because it is my favorite pokemon. I grew up on the show and I was one of the best players in the card game. Basically I would whip most of the guys arses in Pokemon, even in the game boy color games as well. I was wicked =]
Eevee is my choice because it is so unstable and unpredictable, it has the ability to become into any of the main elements: Fire, Electricity, Water, and Beyond. I guess I can relate to Eevee, because I too can be unpredictable, but I can also be whatever I would like to be. Like Eevee, I am also very tiny [5'1] and many people brush me off as a softee, but as always I surprised people.
A contest entry
- So I Heard you Like Mudkips...[and torchics, and pikachus, etc] by Rizzie.
580 points, ended September 3, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any advice would be lovely?
Comments
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Whao.
That is such a good poem. At first I thought that this would be like one of those info books exept on evee and in poetic form. I thought this would be about evee's many evolutions (vaporeon, jolteon, flareon, espeon, umbreon, glaceon, and leafeon). I was completely taken off gaurd. But, of course, in a great and magnificent way. The way you expressed evee's feelings of how she was so ready to battle, how she believed in herself even though that she was smaller and the others were laughing at her and putting her down, I just though that it was spectacular. I was just blown away. It was truly poetic.
Oh, and yes, they are in for a big surprise.
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Thank you very much
I was trying to compare Eevee to myself in some way lol. Because in certain ways, I can relate. But I'm glad you were blown away.
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damnit i thought this was about WALL - E i got so excited. I don't know about Pokemon!!!! lmao
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i love how you wrote such vivid descriptions in your poem! its really cute and eevee is adorable
good luck in the contest!
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