There it was! The darkness she had been praying for.
She was ready to go wherever it would take her.
She just didn't care anymore.
Too many people judging her. Her hair. Her makeup, her fashion statements
As her parents called it.
Her mother "That old bitch" hid behind the bottle, and just couldn't come to the fact that her older sister had committed suicide because her father couldn't keep his greasy palms off of her. That sick bastard tried it with her one day and she just so happened to be near a carving knife. She took flesh.
Ain't it fun to be young. She thought that and puked.
So the dark night of death was ready to take her away. Yes!
And she walked closer, and he grabbed her, and they vanished into blackness.
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A contest entry
- What Comes Next? by XxXEmoRainDropsXxX.
775 points, ended August 22, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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oh wow!!! that was really good!!! and especially since it said soo much and was sooo powerful in just a few words!! dang!! i loved it!!!
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Wow this was dark,powerful & full of emotion.
Your words speak volumes.
This was a great write!
Definately look forward to reading more soon
Good luck in the contest
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