I used my sense of sight and focused on my bride.
I smelled her sweet perfume and felt all passionate inside.
I heard the chapel bells with their sweet refrain.
My brief taste of matrimony--Alas, I'm now divorced again!
In a list
A contest entry
- All Senses Contest ( pre-writes allowed now ) by misticmoonlite.
650 points, ended August 26, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Be Inspired by Your Senses... by harriet567.
450 points, ended October 6, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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lol - props on following directions and including all the senses. Would be more effective without the ' ' around each sense.
Thanks for entering!
Sincerely,
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~ Janet ~ ~
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Great write..
You always seem to make me smile
with your pieces.
good job.
-Mandi
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It's amazing how we meet on here and get to read such excellent pieces. Thanks for stopping by my page. brilliant touch of humour even though there's divorce there, it just made me laugh! Good one!
Lencio
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Of all the pictures you use, this has got to be one of my favorites. Good luck with this, you did a great job.
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lol
pout and be happy...lol life is a great big Whoopeee lol nice entry here, gotta love the divorce word, you use it well...thank you for this entry
Linda -
Maybe he's the lucky one a brief taste may be sweeter than the whole pie. Just dipping a finger gives you no crust. Great job as always, Boog
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lol Yet another great write from the master!
Best of luck my friend.
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