Glistening pearls of anticipation
drip in slow motion
over dark skin of perfection
nails graze stimulation
a gentle breeze cools flesh
burning as passions rise
tangled, breathless whispers
call out intimate cries
bodies woven in a soft shuffle
of erotic appreciation
rhythm quickens reaching
ultimate destination
caught in a sated mesh of
contented sighs
bound, moist lips caress
riding loves high
A contest entry
- Sensual Delights (ADULTS ONLY) by Dusty Rose.
950 points, ended September 3, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love the wording in this erotic piece. (I wish I could write like this) lol. To ride loves high is wonderful, this sent a shiver through me, as I imagined two lovers being totally consumed by each other. Beautiful sug
All the best
Emma
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CLICKED BEFORE I ADDED ME STANDING O!
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KEEP US (I MEAN THEM) COMING, SUGAR.
bodies woven in a soft shuffle
of erotic appreciation
rhythm quickens reaching
ultimate destination
Very nice, Baby! Short, Sweet, Sensual, and flows with the rhythm of lust and love, too! Thanks SO MUCH for sharing this one with me and GOOD LUCK in this contest with this erotica piece. Now it's high time that you got to work on your NAUGHTY PIECE for me contest as me Birthday will be here soon! HE! HE!
Love & Peace!
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LOL!! I think the latter is what you meant
Thanks hon for your wicked comment as always...good job I got me standing O or else I would have had to...I will leave that to your imagination...I know how fertile it is. 
LMAO!
Love you ~sugar~ xxx
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Ahhh!
Erotica that can raise the dead. You just reanimated this zombie and now I'm in search of something to satiate that desire. Naughty, Naughty girl!
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I must have been feeling in a naughty mood.
How's the zombie? Still reanimated.
Always appreciate you reading
Love ~sweetness~
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Sensually beautiful
Softly etched and tones of elegance of love flows within
Love your softer side of writing hun
Julie
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Thanks hon for your lovely comment
~sugar~
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So very soft and sensual. This has a tenderness about it, that floats softly on the wind. Very nice. And Thank you so much for entering.
Dusty
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Thank you for the HM and your lovely comment
valued and appreciated
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Bravo!
Well done, sis. Your romantic side has really shown here. Fine work.
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I thought I would give your heart a rest...don't want it thudding and going in to shock LOL!!! Even though I do have medics on stand by.
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is this me Sugary cookie dough?
Oh my! This is so soft, and warm like a fresh (wait a minute) I'm craving obviously...ahem
ok, back to your poem
Honestly sis, I think you did well with the imagery in this. It's obvious that someone is getting the feel of Romance again 
Can I toast yet?
well...then I need to drink this up before it's watered down 
Gr8t job cookie thanks for sharing!
-e
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I know I'm craving...but I won't go there
It is always a pleasure to recieve your wicked comments
Here is a toast to LOVE
~sugarcookie~
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