Lying in your arms
nothing can touch me.
I'm safe and snug,
all warm and fuzzy.
Not a thing can harm me.
You'd protect me at any cost.
Not sure what I'd do without you.
I simply would be lost.
Lying in your arms,
no place I'd rather be.
Everything I'm looking for,
everything to me.
Safer than I've ever felt,
stronger, more confident.
Don't know why you chose me,
but you sure are heaven sent.
Lying in your arms,
let's make this feeling last.
For I dread the day you leave,
and I become part of your past.
Author notes
Alex, you WOULD make a contest about boys!! lol
boy crazy teenagers anyways.. 
A contest entry
- My Very First Contest! yay! enter NOW quick !!!! haha by Nostalgic Moon.
525 points, ended September 1, 2008, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The poem is emotional and so sensative
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Thanks.. my inspiration, well he's pretty amazing
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I completely understand this poem! The want to be loved and held in someones arms is very strong! Love this poem! Keep up the good poems!!! Keep 'em coming!!
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This is a fantastic piece. It shows a great deal of emotion. And has a great deal of passion threw out it. The ryme and flow is awessome. And the them was perfect...most everyone can relate to this. I have no choice but to give you a 10 out of 10!!! Great!
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hey, congrats on the well deserved silver...love it!!
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One thing you might want to change is "lieing" to the correct spelling "lying." This was so cute, and had a lovey dovey feel to it. Congratulations on silver.
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I really love this poem. My favorite part is:
Not a thing can harm me.
You'd protect me at any cost.
Not sure what I'd do without you.
I simply would be lost.
The rhyming is perfect! It makes sense too.
But my least favorite part is the first verse. It doesn't really rhyme well, and isn't that great. The poem wold be great without it.
The title is okay. Its the repetitive sentence in there. I'm more of a fan of random, metaphorical titles. But this is totally fine. You express yourself well.
To summarize.. "This is just a beautiful poem"!
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Awwwe! So cute!
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Angie??? haha
I think so... I doubt that it isn't you.
haha yes I would make a contest about boys
I love this. expecially the last stanza.
wonderful!
good luck hun!
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