Here I sit inside my hell
alone
unforgiven
and losing what was once real
Losing my mind
and loosing what mattered
alone I sit
in isolation
I would do whatever it is you wanted me to do
if you promised to stay
if you promised to not go
the stale smell of booze has become my favorite smell
it is my cover up
I cover up very well
alone I sit inside my dark hell
wanting to care
and wanting to feel
numb me with novocaine
so I can't feel what is right
lock me away forever
so I can't look into your caring eyes
hear the ticking and tocking of the grand father clock
as I sit alone here
alone I make my walk
the tears I have cried show forgivness in each one
rebirthing me in their salty pleasure
baptizing me and calling me their own
re-born yet again
I walk alone because the pain I wish not to show you
darkness is my comfort
and I am used to being lonley
Here I sit alone in my dark hell
as shadows dance across the room
and your voice is played over and over in my mind
like a old tune I once knew
your forgiving eyes
and the heart you possess
are something I wish not to hurt
when isolation is at it's best
I am a slave
bound by lonley
and bound by hurt
I live for pain
and I die for re-birth
I am here bound by these chains
a slave to isolation
and a slave to myself.
Author notes
fish-fugazi---lyrix inspired.
In a list
A contest entry
- An Affair With Isolation by aliceramone.
900 points, ended September 3, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please give me your honest opinion on what you truly think of this piece I will return the favor...*muah* (redhanded)
Comments
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What a dark and dreary piece, but it is such a good write. It has lovely flow to it.
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a good piece with a good flow and I do dig the title alot...first two stanzas did you mean "losing"?...anyway some dark heart and soul here that is well done...thank for entering and good luck in the contest.
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thankyou very much for commenting my piece and yes losing LOl not loosing ha...ill change that rite now thnxxx....thankyou again for ur kind words on my poem..and best of luck to you in the future and with your writing...
andi
(redhanded)
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ps..
heres your applause.
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AWWWWSSOOOOOME. I really like the lines
"I walk alone because the pain I wish not to show you
darkness is my comfort
and I am used to being lonley"
That is like what i used to do all the time, just walk alone, b/c your so into the dark, just comforted by the nothingness and everything all at once.
And you just get so used to being alone, that its hard to see that there are other ppl out there.
im kinda going threw a thing right now witha guy, and i would have given him the world, but he turned his back on me b/c im "WEIRD" and now he wont talk to me. it shouldnt really bother me, b/c he's liek one of those guys who dosnet really stay with a chick for a long time, but he was really sweet when we were talking.
but anywhom, there's a poem on my pg. about it.
check it out.
loves you man. <333
Danielle~*
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