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Hate You My Dear Friend?

I took you into my confidence
You turst me, I trust you
But now I feel betrayed by your silence

Best friends, sisters, and now you deny!
How can you give yourself the title
When you won't even look me in the eye

The fury inside of me is taking over my heart
Our minds were once linked
Now I have wounds from where you tore us apart

You left, walked away from me
Leaving me alone and lost again
This pain makes it so hard to breathe

You call yourself my friend
Curse you for not understanding, for not seeing
You see, I hate you my dear friend

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  • feelingforgotten
    August 25, 2008
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    This is exactly how I feel right now.
    Perfectly stated!


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    August 22, 2008

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    It is very hurtful when we lose a close friend. I think we may even tend to label the feeling hate, but I don't think it is. It's just an aching hurt. This is a good write, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.


    whisper