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a game of luck.

Baseball is
a game of luck.
It’s luck if your
bat hits the ball,
luck if it goes
over the wall.
You’re lucky
if it don’t rain,
and you’re damn lucky
if you win the game.

Author notes

Just a random

ditty that floated

into my brain

while my dad

watched the Cubs.

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  • A-Sky-Lark
    August 21, 2008
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    lol, leave it to brian to comment on yer poem like that...


  • irish17crazy
    August 21, 2008
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    no! :P

    sorry....I strongly disagree...with:It’s luck if your
    bat hits the ball-lol...sorry, idk, maybe sometimes this works, but from experience-it takes skill and hand eye coordination . how the ball bounces, yes, the rain, sure, the calls the umpire makes...whether the ball carries over the wall or not sure...but no...not so much *hitting the ball*-unless you're just that lucky ! ahahah...lol...good write though...couldn't resist putting my two cents in!


    • TheStupidLamb
      August 22, 2008
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      oh brian, i guess it's just luck then if the ball his MY bat. lol. here, take back your two cents and go buy yourself something pretty.