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My Heartfelt Expressions

Twilight has risen against shining sun.
My dearest African is lost beyond horizon.
Where is he....why has he fled from me?
My sweetest I love; an addiction to my flesh,
he's more glorified than moon or sun have e'er been.
He's owning much sweet grandeur and soft candor 

and he exposes all his loveliness with fluent tongue.

I love his charm and dear manly beauty-

and he's sculpted well his handsome booty.

  

I wish for eternal sight of his charming flesh,

but all I own is his fading scent.

Author notes

I think we've all fallen for such a person at some point in life, even if they're fictional.

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    August 22, 2008

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    I love the line "an addiction to my flesh", that is exactly how it feels at the time. Wonderful write, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.


    whisper


  • Venugopal gold member
    August 22, 2008
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    very sweet poem indeed


  • darell
    August 21, 2008

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    Sweet!

    A charming poem that speaks finely of
    romantic admiration. The primier of loves
    enchanting embrace. Whoever this was written
    for should be honored. You've penned and
    excellent piece that makes the heart smile