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Confused!

My minds confused
I'm having trouble choosing
Weather or not
I want to leave or stay.
It's a hard choice
When you have two people
That love you,
And they both
Want you to be in there lives.
You don't want to hurt
Neither one of them
But you got to know one
Now it is time to know the other
Do I really know what I want?
Is life supposed to be this difficult?
I want one
But then I want the other
It's a 50/50 chance
But thats the hard part.
It's confusing
To confusing to handle on my own
It's hard to decide
Thoughts running in my head
Having to do with both people.

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  • Im Forever Yours
    August 25, 2008

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    This is a great poem but it sounds like a poem that I had written when I was still living with mom. Its still good, keep up the great work