When you touch me I melt under your hands sending a sensation from my nose to my toes.
My body shivers and my mind slowly empties out.
I look into your blue eyes sparkling like a midnight sky as you stare into my eyes trying to discover everything I feel but the longer I stare the farther I drift as if I was floating in the ocean and all my worries sink to the very bottom where no one has to deal with them any longer.
All that was left was just a you & a me...
....like it was suppose to be
Author notes
zangy556
hey i didnt know how to add the screen name on prewrite so i just clicked new even know its a prewrite..
A contest entry
- personal poetry. ❤ by aanika.
1147 points, ended September 13, 2008, 40 entries
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Comments
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"suppose" in the last line should be "supposed"
and I suggest you add line breaks.
thanks for entering
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