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Pirate Ship

                      YARR
                      HARR HARR!!
                      A  pirate’s
                      Life for  me!
                      Sailing, merrily,
                      Oh so very merrily,
                      Over the crystal seas!
                      Yo
                      Ho
                      Ho.
                      Can
                      You
                      See,
                      The
                      Sea?
We plunder for treasure, in the sea.  And  forage,  for
    Your things, once we land. We rob, and steal, and
      Take your belongings. Especially if they’re
          Valubale! So run,  run  far,  far  away,
            ‘Cause, me hearty, we’re coming,
      And not to give you a warm
                Welcome! Yarr harr!

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  • Wutz Luv
    October 13
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    lol this was nice, great shape poem you have here. I dont know why but it made me laugh.


  • polly filla
    August 25, 2008

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    cool!

    it would be even better (to me) if the content was deep

    I think there's too much repetition in the 'sea' rhyme...yet it stands proud as it is, so I say, well done!


  • just mercedes gold member
    August 23, 2008
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    This is great! So clever in shape, and a good, funny poem. Well done!


  • SilverWolf
    August 21, 2008

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    I love how its shaped like a pirate ship!
    I can't beleive someone so young wrote such a adult and funny poem like this! Really cute! Good luck in the contest you entered! God bless!


  • Elisabeth Strange
    August 21, 2008
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    I really love pirates! I especially love how your poem is shaped like a pirate ship! Very cute!


  • LongPatrol
    August 21, 2008
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    Messed up a little at the end, but other than that, it ok, thanks to a little help from a replier called little feather. Thanks Little Feather.

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