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your frown is begging to be dyslexic

 

Thoughts drown the cerebral valley,
just making things worse.
Pitter-patter of teen angst,
walking across my heart.

Maybe I just need a new start...
Don't look back,
to face the past.
Because the future
knows you are beautiful.
It doesn't take a rocket scientist
to know how to reach for the stars.

Turn things around
and from being upside-down.
Smile and start over,
don't give up yet.

After every storm,
after every downpur,
there's a rainbow shining bright.

 

 

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for AVariableGuilt - don't give up, weather the storm and come out on top

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    September 2, 2008

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    Nice Work!

    Glad you won a trophy for this! Love the title & the way you start this out:

    Thoughts drown the cerebral valley,
    just making things worse.
    Pitter-patter of teen angst,
    walking across my heart.

    Thoughts drown the cerebral valley: What a great line! This is so visual & mentally captivating for me.

    Just a note, after every storm there isn't always a rainbow, but I really appreciate the sentiment! This is very upbeat & sunny, with positive thoughts for the future! Way to go...


  • Number 13
    August 22, 2008

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    Hope always prevails

    "Don't look back,
    to face the past.
    Because the future
    knows you are beautiful.
    It doesn't take a rocket scientist
    to know how to reach for the stars."

    && you never fail to amaze me :]

    btw you missed a 'T' in scientist


  • AVariableGuilt
    August 21, 2008

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    That was good, I was like thinking, "Hey he/shes trying to have a go at me" =O (Dyslexia tends to be an insult)
    but then I read that and i got wowed
    like all wowish
    anyways, thanks for entering


    • lowercase prelude gold member
      August 21, 2008
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      true, but i decided to use the meaning of dyslexia in a more positive way

      i don't like insults either
      thanks for the comment


  • Xianaria gold member
    August 21, 2008
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    love the title! this is very cool, nicely done!

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