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Life!

Am I lost
Or am I confused.
Am I sad
Or am I just lonely.
My thoughts are running
To fast for me
To go after.
My thoughts are confusing,
Like a puzzle
Without the pieces
You try to put them together
But yet.
Your still left
With empty spaces.
Understanding myself
Is the hardest thing
That you can be
But when you can't find yourself
Is more confusing
Than your uncontrolable thoughts.
Can anyone
Understand me
Or am I lost
In this lonely evil world.
I'm alone
With no one to guide me
In wich direction
That I should go.
I should stay here
And lead myself
The way I belive
I should go.

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  • Im Forever Yours
    August 25, 2008

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    This seems really like a old poem of mine, are you sure you didn't use my poem and just turn the words around. Remember I left all my poems when I left there are you using them? I like it though