I know that it's wrong.
I am thinking of him again.
I wonder if he's thinking of me too?
I long for him to be my everlasting friend.
I want to share my life with him.
I know I'm walking a tight rope.
Though sometimes without him,
I feel like I can't cope.
He is the meaning of my existence.
I would love for him to save me.
I wish we could drive off to happiness.
I wish he could see.
I heard our song on the radio.
I am staring to feel a little low.
I am starting to feel the pain,
but I don't want to let it show.
I miss him with all my heart.
I wish he was here.
If he was
I would hold him so dear.
Author notes
I chose word bank number one.
A contest entry
- The Prompt Coffee House: Prompt Challenge Round 3: Word Banks by Ceridwens Soul.
1050 points, ended September 12, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A powerful declaration of love. The sense of loss yet knowing you have to let go too strikes out in the imagery. Well done.
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If I was this guy look out
I can feel the desire in this one. -
Thank you for your entry, good luck!
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