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What between friends?



you know,
i was listening to a song today
deep thinking about the lyrics
(i get that way)
it made me realize
what out loud i wanted to say
you dear lady are my friend
i'm at your disposal
when you need an ear
i'll lend
i'll say this once more
you are my friend
i'm here to support you
time and again

the suggestive sway
in the melody of these words
made me think of you
your generosity
sent chills down my spine
to think of someone being so kind
especially a friendly stranger
makes it not so strange
because beyond this screen
is a beam of light
that shines and says
love is the bigger picture
even when the flash is almost unseen

that's just it
i get what you mean
sometimes you don't the know what you gleam
to find one such as you to be a guide
touches my heart
it's warm in inside
you've been giving of your heart
to people i see
God's angel on earth
so happy to meet thee













Author notes

In collaboration with my dear friend "Swangrnv"

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  • My Nemesis
    August 25, 2008
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    A wonderful poem - and a beautiful tribute to friendships, both on and off the internet.


  • arafura gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    I'm pleased I decided to check out your work! You are a wonderful writer with all the heart and skill you need to go far. BRAVO!


  • smiley
    August 23, 2008

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    awesome

    this was an awesome collab. you two did a great job..


    Yvonne

  • mcheadle
    August 22, 2008
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    You have a true frien from what I can see --l

    Lucky- lucky you. May you keep your friend forever...mac


  • secberm
    August 21, 2008

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    What it is? Slide me some skin! You know I gots no friends. If you close, you family. Well, if it isn't my brother and sister. Girl you know you my play mother. And you know I love you like platano maduro (sp) the way my momma used to make gee-nay-yo (sp). Y'all don't know nothing about that. That's like collard greens if you from down south. LOL Write on you too. Luv, y'all.

    Dez


  • z etoile
    August 21, 2008

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    Awe what a beautifuk collaboration I loved this you guys both outstanding poets puting your talents together great job


  • forty-one
    August 21, 2008

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    because beyond this screen
    is a beam of light that shines and says
    love is the bigger picture...

    I really enjoyed those lines... they lend themselves to hope, and sometimes... hope is all we have. This was an interesting read for me

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    • poetryality silver member
      August 23, 2008
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      Thank you love for this comment. It's filled with encouragement. We all need that eleemnt in life. I hope you are getting your fair share.



      Always ♥

      Renee

    • poetryality silver member
      August 23, 2008
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      Thank you for the generous comment. I agree, "sometimes hope is all we have"! Thanks for stopping by. You've been MIA for a while. I hope your life is filled with love and laughter.


      Blessings & Love ♥

      Renee

      • forty-one
        August 24, 2008
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        poetryality

        It seems that poetry has been the most dominant of my interests as of late, so I decided that it's time for me to indulge some of the others. I'm always around though... usually stopping for what catches my eye while I'm here.

        many blessings to you as well...
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